I really like the three colors you chose, yellow, green, and purple are a cool combination and I think this composition will work well. Excited to see your progress.
I think it’s coming out great and your final composition will turn out great if you stay on track. You are nailing the yellow thingy and getting the green to compliment it well. However, to progress, I would add a little more color to the shadow in the back of the bottles and make to bottom of the purple bottle a little darker. Overall, great job! I cant wait to see the final peice!
Don’t know what fruit that is but I LOVE the smooth yellow color in there!!! Also, you’re doing a good job with the transparency of the mirror. One thing I’ll recommend is making sure to capture the objects’ transition to their reflections in the mirror; for the green bottle, the bottom is a little darker and the purple one has a lighter bottom
Did you go back and rework the drawing post-critique? If so please post a final picture.
Afiwa’s comments about the bottles and mirror reflections is spot on-were going to fix this issue?
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I really like the three colors you chose, yellow, green, and purple are a cool combination and I think this composition will work well. Excited to see your progress.
I think it’s coming out great and your final composition will turn out great if you stay on track. You are nailing the yellow thingy and getting the green to compliment it well. However, to progress, I would add a little more color to the shadow in the back of the bottles and make to bottom of the purple bottle a little darker. Overall, great job! I cant wait to see the final peice!
Don’t know what fruit that is but I LOVE the smooth yellow color in there!!! Also, you’re doing a good job with the transparency of the mirror. One thing I’ll recommend is making sure to capture the objects’ transition to their reflections in the mirror; for the green bottle, the bottom is a little darker and the purple one has a lighter bottom
Did you go back and rework the drawing post-critique? If so please post a final picture.
Afiwa’s comments about the bottles and mirror reflections is spot on-were going to fix this issue?