3 Comments

  1. J says:

    It is looking good so far! I think you really nailed the building blocks.
    I understand not being as far along as you’d like to be, but you are making good progress. Good luck with the rest of it, you’re doing great!

  2. Katelyn McNamara says:

    Amazing job Ben! I think this composition is very compelling and I think you did a great job with open, touch, and crop I especially think that having the corner of the table touch at the very bottom of the page works well.

    I also think that you did a great job varying your line weights with the table and some of the detail work being lighter single lines and with the more prominent objects such as the bird house roof, blocks, and metal bucket having a heavier weight.

    My only suggestion might be to not be afraid to leave your grid and ghost lines in the drawing so that we can see your process and analytical work better.

  3. Deirdre Murphy says:

    Bravo Ben! Your hard work paid off in a strong analytical drawing. It was worth the fight! Keep up the good work.

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