Andrea, this is beautiful! I think you did an amazing job getting the correct perspectives and angles from the picture you took of the still life. I also think it was smart to leave the top edge of the drawing open because the other edges of the drawing touch and crop the objects. This top edge creates a nice negative space shape.
I think you did a good job cleaning up your lines and adding thickness, while also still leaving the lines you used in your grid to show your process.
I might touch up some of the curved shapes (the buckets) because they seem a bit flat and the lines are less clean. I would suggest that you look again and compare to the picture to make sure that the curves are correct. Otherwise great job!
Fantastic job with composition, perspective and analytical lines! Katelyn gave some wonderful advice regarding the curves. If this drawing is any indication then you are going to have a stellar semester drawing! keep up the great work!
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Andrea, this is beautiful! I think you did an amazing job getting the correct perspectives and angles from the picture you took of the still life. I also think it was smart to leave the top edge of the drawing open because the other edges of the drawing touch and crop the objects. This top edge creates a nice negative space shape.
I think you did a good job cleaning up your lines and adding thickness, while also still leaving the lines you used in your grid to show your process.
I might touch up some of the curved shapes (the buckets) because they seem a bit flat and the lines are less clean. I would suggest that you look again and compare to the picture to make sure that the curves are correct. Otherwise great job!
Fantastic job with composition, perspective and analytical lines! Katelyn gave some wonderful advice regarding the curves. If this drawing is any indication then you are going to have a stellar semester drawing! keep up the great work!